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02 January 2006 @ 09:28 pm
[FIC] Ore-sama's Desire [PG - Kabaji x Atobe]  
Happy birthday, Kabaji ^___^! *gives you Ore-sama as a present*

Title: Ore-sama's Desire
Author: M [info]snowym
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Kabaji x Atobe o.O;
Rating: PG
Warnings: mentions of frustrated car!smex
Word Count: 271
Note: I have listened to Bokutachi no Shippai far too much (the crackiest PoT song ehvar so far, I'd say, which is saying something ^^;), and I finally had to write something about it. Atobe's spoken line is meant to sound just like in the song (DL and translation), so if you haven't heard it, just picture Atobe in heat. Okay, now go fan yourself off, and then read the fic if you so desire. Although, I'd advise against it.

Atobe Keigo took great pride in himself.

Although, that may be a bit of an understatement.

He had hundreds of adoring fangirls (and boys) at school. This was for good reason, since he was clearly better, and more lovely, than anyone on the Hyotei tennis team.

He was confident, yet somewhat bedazzled by his own good looks. Looking into the mirror was a gift unto itself.

He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?

Being Atobe Keigo was the single most wonderful pleasure of his life. Except...

Something went wrong.

One day, he began to notice an oddity that didn’t coincide with his natural self-infatuation. For some reason, he found himself attracted to someone of a lower status than himself. Someone who could never in a million years match his radiance. Someone who was practically his servant... and well... he didn’t quite know what to do. This couldn’t possibly work... but yet, he didn’t know if it was possible to deny Atobe-sama one of his desires.

So one day, when the object of his repressed affections pushed him down in the back of the limo, he didn’t think about it.

He was Ore-sama. He could do anything.

And right now, he wanted this one-worded wonder.

“Uus.”

“Kabaji! Kabaj~i!”

He also wanted the other to say his name too one day, but for now, this was enough.

“Uus.”

Although, he would eventually get his way. Mostly because he was Ore-sama, and partly because he had the sneaking suspicion he could train Kabaji to. God, it was good having control.

“Kabaj~i!”

Or losing it.
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Helen: Brain broke [by fengshoegal][info]disutansu on January 2nd, 2006 07:52 pm (UTC)
*covers face and turns red*

Oh.em.gee.

I was able to imagine it and... I liked it.

I am so shipping Kabaji x Atobe after this.

*sporks self and dies*

Ore-dono, we love you! XDDD *dead*
M: zomg who farted?[info]snowym on January 2nd, 2006 07:57 pm (UTC)
Mwhahaha, you know you luff it ^_^. Kabaji x Atobe is so... scary, that you can't help but have your interest piqued.

I'll be online tonight, but I'm just checking my e-mail and posting for now. I need some time to crash on a flat surface for a bit. But I'll be back in an hour or two ^^;! *snuggles Helen* Thanks for letting me corrupt you a bit more ^_^. *gets a running start, and burries self under covers*
Becca: Sota - Let there be slash![info]umbrellaofdoom on January 2nd, 2006 08:47 pm (UTC)
Oh... my...
*giggles*
He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?
BEST. LINE. EVER. XD
M: exhibitionism aka tenimyu[info]snowym on January 3rd, 2006 12:48 pm (UTC)
That's the line that popped into my head that made me write this fic in the first place ^^;. Atobe would so do that, you cannot deny. Nfu >3.
fuckface extraordinaire[info]kishmet on January 2nd, 2006 09:26 pm (UTC)

akhfleadkjhfjkahlfkjs *flailspazspaz*

I loved this!! You have entirely converted me to the pairing (well, you and some songs... *cough*)!!! So absolutely lovely. Oh, the cracktacular canon-ness of it all! ♥
M: let's spork one another[info]snowym on January 3rd, 2006 12:52 pm (UTC)
o.O. *has a tranquilizer on hand, just in case Kishu starts foaming at the mouth*

Mwhahaha, I knew others would see the light! Just-about-anyone x Atobe is lovely to me, but I love the twisted aspect that would have to be in Kabaji and Atobe's relationship ^^. I'm scared to draw fanart, though >.>. I don't know if I need that visual. *shall ponder upon it* I'll probably end up doing it, since I draw such scary things anyway ^__^.
fuckface extraordinaire: Lsamahee[info]kishmet on January 3rd, 2006 03:27 pm (UTC)
AtobexKabaji fanart...heh, snerk, flail... *ZOMGFOAMINGATTHEMOUTH* Visuaaaaaaaallll is alwayssssssss betterrrrrrrrrr.

In case you haven't noticed, I think I'll be needing that tranquilizer. ^______^
trinity helix[info]trinityhelix on January 3rd, 2006 01:46 am (UTC)
oh dear lord.

awesome awesome fic. XDDD *hugs tight*

i second helen's comment-- i can SO TOTALLY SEE THIS WHILE I READ OMG. XDDDDD
M: headshot!akutsu[info]snowym on January 3rd, 2006 12:53 pm (UTC)
Sankyu ^__^. *snuggles back*

I take no responsibility for nightmares ^^;. Get it out, get it out! *whaps head*
histoirede[info]histoirede on January 3rd, 2006 01:31 pm (UTC)
KabaAto fiiiiic *dances with joy*
Good KabaAto fiiiiic *dances some more*

... Will you write some more ?
M[info]snowym on January 3rd, 2006 02:43 pm (UTC)
Sankyu #^__^#.

I'll probably end up writing some more of this pairing sometime, just because it's so twisted ^_^. Kabaji x Atobe is the definition of Master and Servant relationships, I tell you >3.
histoirede[info]histoirede on January 3rd, 2006 02:44 pm (UTC)
It's not twisted it's just... different X3 (But come on, it's sooo canon !)
M: headshot!akutsu[info]snowym on January 3rd, 2006 02:50 pm (UTC)
It's twisted if you go on to think about all the other things in their relationship ^____^. And twisted IS different >3.

5 things you ought to, but probably didn't want to know about Kabaji:
1. He sleeps in a trundlebed, hooked onto Ore-sama's bed.
2. Kabaji was once an orphan, but ever since he was left in an extremely large basket on Atobe's doorstep (at the age of 10), he's never been alone since.
3. There is actually quite a lot going on behind those big "doe-caught-in-headlight" eyes. Mainly things about how he can better serve Atobe, although he does have a few fleeting thoughts about whether his hair is spiky enough or not every now and then.
4. "Uus" is actually code for "Oh god, yes master."
5. Kabaji was made for Atobe's pleasure.

I will never deny their canon'ness, so don't worry ^____^.
histoirede[info]histoirede on January 3rd, 2006 02:55 pm (UTC)
I actually love Kabaji and believe in all that... or most of it X3
*tries to hide the huge collection of KabaAto dôjin behind her*
Haruka: tarma: atobe-blue[info]tarma on January 3rd, 2006 02:04 pm (UTC)
That was awesome! XD Very much Atobe, and I liked how he wanted to hear Kabaji say his name.

(Thanks, also, for actually writing out their entire names in the subject. I tend to intentionally skip over fics that abbreviate and combine character names, and would have been sorry to miss this. ^_^)
M: blushy!Kaidoh[info]snowym on January 3rd, 2006 02:45 pm (UTC)
Sankyu ^___^! *snuggles you*

(I always write it out, because I sure as heck don't recognize pairings very easily by the abbreviated things ^^;. Surely there are some people out there just as confused as me.)
Haruka: tarma: fuji-click[info]tarma on January 3rd, 2006 04:04 pm (UTC)
I am, especially when I'm new to a fandom (I'm not new to PoT, but I AM still new to the Tenimyus, and the abbreviations are hateful for trying to learn/remember the actor names in those fics.)
Tro: tenipuri | hyoutei | omgfrog![info]trowicia on January 3rd, 2006 04:43 pm (UTC)
He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?
SO TRUE.

When I first heard Atobe say “Kabaji! Kabaj~i!” in the song, I thought, "Oh, God, that sounds SO WRONG. XD" But it's really sexy the way he says it, too. :P

Love the ending. The pairing IS scary, but this was great. XD
M: let there be slash[info]snowym on January 7th, 2006 11:19 am (UTC)
That's the line that started this whole fic ^^;. Atobe just seems like that kind of guy.

Those were my thoughts exactly. Now I practically just listen to the song now to hear those lines. And I wonder if the voiceactor got embarassed while saying it >3.

Sankyuuu ^___^.
Lexie: kabaji&atobe // if you are with me[info]nachtmusik on January 3rd, 2006 05:44 pm (UTC)
Eeee KabaTobe! ♥
Emily[info]bit_dreams on January 3rd, 2006 08:05 pm (UTC)
oo... this was lovely... haven't actually given Kabaji and Atobe a chance at being a pairing...>.>

...Now that I think about it... It's cannon, but its SCARY... o.O;
Nonetheless, I still very much liked this. Especially the beginning, where it showcases the arrogance that is Atobe. ^________^
M: EH!?[info]snowym on January 7th, 2006 11:16 am (UTC)
I didn't really think about them as a pairing too much either until I wrote this ^^;. The Ichinen Trio song pushed me over the edge >3.

You know you like the fear. LIVE ON IT! Mwhahahaaa~!
I'm glad you liked it ^_^. Atobe is so adorable. *is an Ore-sama fan*
Sexy Space Explorer: happy[info]wunder on January 4th, 2006 08:37 am (UTC)
OTP ;__;
KabaTobe.♥ Dude, i'm so faving this.;__;
M: dork!Inui[info]snowym on January 4th, 2006 08:18 pm (UTC)
Re: OTP ;__;
Wow, I commend you on the Kabaji x Atobe OTP ^___^. It must be hard finding fics, ne? *snuggles you* Thanks for liking my fic ^^!
Sexy Space Explorer[info]wunder on January 6th, 2006 07:56 am (UTC)
Re: OTP ;__;
It must be hard finding fics, ne?

Dude you have no idea.XD Still, it's worth the look, I really like this pair. Thank you for making this fic!♥
isoyou: Milo - boobs![info]magnet_dance on January 5th, 2006 05:13 am (UTC)
Weee~! KabaAto! The most canon PoT yaoi pair (& that's saying alot) XD
Really liked it!

Thought you'd like to know, if I 'm remembering my 20.5 right Kabaji's actually from some aristrocratic family which is why Atobe keeps him around. Since he thinks Kabaji's the only guy his level XDD
M: a drug reference[info]snowym on January 7th, 2006 11:13 am (UTC)
Hai, their canon'ness is glorious ^^. Although... *still clutches to fav practically!canon pairing, InuKai, and doesn't let go*

That's good to know, in case I get possessed to write another Kabaji x Atobe fic ^^;. It didn't even occur to me to look up their backgrounds, I just felt like making up random things about them. So you can officially think of this as an AU fic, if you so desire, for my silliness ^^;;;.
Ai[info]aiwritingfic on January 5th, 2006 05:37 am (UTC)
*ROFL*

I will never look at Kabaji in the same way again. *laughing*
M: doom!Fuji[info]snowym on January 7th, 2006 11:08 am (UTC)
Sankyu ^_^!
Chibimono presents: BRONZE PAIR!: Badassed Mofo[info]fffshuuu on January 10th, 2006 01:49 pm (UTC)
You know... normally, I hate Atobe.... But I'm actually beginning to like him because of crack like this. XDDD I need to make myself an Ore-sama icon. Because everyone needs an Ore-sama icon. *nods*
M: I am so hardcore[info]snowym on January 12th, 2006 09:50 pm (UTC)
Ore-sama requires your adoration. What, you won't bow before Ore-sama? GUARDS! *you are FORCED to bow before Ore-sama, cause that's how the world works*
L_Schizophrenic[info]l_schizophrenic on December 23rd, 2006 01:18 am (UTC)
He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?
I know almost everyone else commented on that sentence, but I loved that line.

Plus I love you for writing this. ^__^ This pairing needs more love! It is so hard to find Kabaji/Atobe fics...
M: Princess Princess D (mikoto x otoya)[info]snowym on December 23rd, 2006 02:28 am (UTC)
Shh, it's a secret... that's my favorite line too XD;.

Yay, I'm glad you liked it ^___^. I haven't written anymore of this pairing, but I kind of want to. It's so... yeah, I like them XD.

How did you even find this fic? I think I posted it to a random tenipuri community once upon a time, but that was ages ago XD;.
L_Schizophrenic[info]l_schizophrenic on December 23rd, 2006 03:19 pm (UTC)
I found this through a search engine...^^;; Yay Google!
M: onegai!WaT[info]snowym on December 23rd, 2006 10:05 pm (UTC)
Are you serious? That's hilarious XDD. I'm glad Google approves of me-- however it deems to select it's lucky chosen few (pfft XD; ) for its search engine ^^.
 
 

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