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Happy birthday, Kabaji ^___^! *gives you Ore-sama as a present*

Title: Ore-sama's Desire
Author: M snowym
Fandom: Prince of Tennis
Pairing: Kabaji x Atobe o.O;
Rating: PG
Warnings: mentions of frustrated car!smex
Word Count: 271
Note: I have listened to Bokutachi no Shippai far too much (the crackiest PoT song ehvar so far, I'd say, which is saying something ^^;), and I finally had to write something about it. Atobe's spoken line is meant to sound just like in the song (DL and translation), so if you haven't heard it, just picture Atobe in heat. Okay, now go fan yourself off, and then read the fic if you so desire. Although, I'd advise against it.

Atobe Keigo took great pride in himself.

Although, that may be a bit of an understatement.

He had hundreds of adoring fangirls (and boys) at school. This was for good reason, since he was clearly better, and more lovely, than anyone on the Hyotei tennis team.

He was confident, yet somewhat bedazzled by his own good looks. Looking into the mirror was a gift unto itself.

He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?

Being Atobe Keigo was the single most wonderful pleasure of his life. Except...

Something went wrong.

One day, he began to notice an oddity that didn’t coincide with his natural self-infatuation. For some reason, he found himself attracted to someone of a lower status than himself. Someone who could never in a million years match his radiance. Someone who was practically his servant... and well... he didn’t quite know what to do. This couldn’t possibly work... but yet, he didn’t know if it was possible to deny Atobe-sama one of his desires.

So one day, when the object of his repressed affections pushed him down in the back of the limo, he didn’t think about it.

He was Ore-sama. He could do anything.

And right now, he wanted this one-worded wonder.

“Uus.”

“Kabaji! Kabaj~i!”

He also wanted the other to say his name too one day, but for now, this was enough.

“Uus.”

Although, he would eventually get his way. Mostly because he was Ore-sama, and partly because he had the sneaking suspicion he could train Kabaji to. God, it was good having control.

“Kabaj~i!”

Or losing it.

Comments

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disutansu
Jan. 2nd, 2006 07:52 pm (UTC)
*covers face and turns red*

Oh.em.gee.

I was able to imagine it and... I liked it.

I am so shipping Kabaji x Atobe after this.


*sporks self and dies*

Ore-dono, we love you! XDDD *dead*
snowym
Jan. 2nd, 2006 07:57 pm (UTC)
Mwhahaha, you know you luff it ^_^. Kabaji x Atobe is so... scary, that you can't help but have your interest piqued.

I'll be online tonight, but I'm just checking my e-mail and posting for now. I need some time to crash on a flat surface for a bit. But I'll be back in an hour or two ^^;! *snuggles Helen* Thanks for letting me corrupt you a bit more ^_^. *gets a running start, and burries self under covers*
umbrellaofdoom
Jan. 2nd, 2006 08:47 pm (UTC)
Oh... my...
*giggles*
He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?
BEST. LINE. EVER. XD
snowym
Jan. 3rd, 2006 12:48 pm (UTC)
That's the line that popped into my head that made me write this fic in the first place ^^;. Atobe would so do that, you cannot deny. Nfu >3.
kishmet
Jan. 2nd, 2006 09:26 pm (UTC)

akhfleadkjhfjkahlfkjs *flailspazspaz*

I loved this!! You have entirely converted me to the pairing (well, you and some songs... *cough*)!!! So absolutely lovely. Oh, the cracktacular canon-ness of it all! ♥
snowym
Jan. 3rd, 2006 12:52 pm (UTC)
o.O. *has a tranquilizer on hand, just in case Kishu starts foaming at the mouth*

Mwhahaha, I knew others would see the light! Just-about-anyone x Atobe is lovely to me, but I love the twisted aspect that would have to be in Kabaji and Atobe's relationship ^^. I'm scared to draw fanart, though >.>. I don't know if I need that visual. *shall ponder upon it* I'll probably end up doing it, since I draw such scary things anyway ^__^.
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snowym
Jan. 3rd, 2006 12:53 pm (UTC)
Sankyu ^__^. *snuggles back*

I take no responsibility for nightmares ^^;. Get it out, get it out! *whaps head*
histoirede
Jan. 3rd, 2006 01:31 pm (UTC)
KabaAto fiiiiic *dances with joy*
Good KabaAto fiiiiic *dances some more*

... Will you write some more ?
snowym
Jan. 3rd, 2006 02:43 pm (UTC)
Sankyu #^__^#.

I'll probably end up writing some more of this pairing sometime, just because it's so twisted ^_^. Kabaji x Atobe is the definition of Master and Servant relationships, I tell you >3.
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tarma
Jan. 3rd, 2006 02:04 pm (UTC)
That was awesome! XD Very much Atobe, and I liked how he wanted to hear Kabaji say his name.

(Thanks, also, for actually writing out their entire names in the subject. I tend to intentionally skip over fics that abbreviate and combine character names, and would have been sorry to miss this. ^_^)
snowym
Jan. 3rd, 2006 02:45 pm (UTC)
Sankyu ^___^! *snuggles you*

(I always write it out, because I sure as heck don't recognize pairings very easily by the abbreviated things ^^;. Surely there are some people out there just as confused as me.)
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trowicia
Jan. 3rd, 2006 04:43 pm (UTC)
He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?
SO TRUE.

When I first heard Atobe say “Kabaji! Kabaj~i!” in the song, I thought, "Oh, God, that sounds SO WRONG. XD" But it's really sexy the way he says it, too. :P

Love the ending. The pairing IS scary, but this was great. XD
snowym
Jan. 7th, 2006 11:19 am (UTC)
That's the line that started this whole fic ^^;. Atobe just seems like that kind of guy.

Those were my thoughts exactly. Now I practically just listen to the song now to hear those lines. And I wonder if the voiceactor got embarassed while saying it >3.

Sankyuuu ^___^.
nachtmusik
Jan. 3rd, 2006 05:44 pm (UTC)
Eeee KabaTobe! ♥
bit_dreams
Jan. 3rd, 2006 08:05 pm (UTC)
oo... this was lovely... haven't actually given Kabaji and Atobe a chance at being a pairing...>.>

...Now that I think about it... It's cannon, but its SCARY... o.O;
Nonetheless, I still very much liked this. Especially the beginning, where it showcases the arrogance that is Atobe. ^________^
snowym
Jan. 7th, 2006 11:16 am (UTC)
I didn't really think about them as a pairing too much either until I wrote this ^^;. The Ichinen Trio song pushed me over the edge >3.

You know you like the fear. LIVE ON IT! Mwhahahaaa~!
I'm glad you liked it ^_^. Atobe is so adorable. *is an Ore-sama fan*
wunder
Jan. 4th, 2006 08:37 am (UTC)
OTP ;__;
KabaTobe.♥ Dude, i'm so faving this.;__;
snowym
Jan. 4th, 2006 08:18 pm (UTC)
Re: OTP ;__;
Wow, I commend you on the Kabaji x Atobe OTP ^___^. It must be hard finding fics, ne? *snuggles you* Thanks for liking my fic ^^!
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magnet_dance
Jan. 5th, 2006 05:13 am (UTC)
Weee~! KabaAto! The most canon PoT yaoi pair (& that's saying alot) XD
Really liked it!

Thought you'd like to know, if I 'm remembering my 20.5 right Kabaji's actually from some aristrocratic family which is why Atobe keeps him around. Since he thinks Kabaji's the only guy his level XDD
snowym
Jan. 7th, 2006 11:13 am (UTC)
Hai, their canon'ness is glorious ^^. Although... *still clutches to fav practically!canon pairing, InuKai, and doesn't let go*

That's good to know, in case I get possessed to write another Kabaji x Atobe fic ^^;. It didn't even occur to me to look up their backgrounds, I just felt like making up random things about them. So you can officially think of this as an AU fic, if you so desire, for my silliness ^^;;;.
aiwritingfic
Jan. 5th, 2006 05:37 am (UTC)
*ROFL*

I will never look at Kabaji in the same way again. *laughing*
snowym
Jan. 7th, 2006 11:08 am (UTC)
Sankyu ^_^!
chibimono
Jan. 10th, 2006 01:49 pm (UTC)
You know... normally, I hate Atobe.... But I'm actually beginning to like him because of crack like this. XDDD I need to make myself an Ore-sama icon. Because everyone needs an Ore-sama icon. *nods*
snowym
Jan. 12th, 2006 09:50 pm (UTC)
Ore-sama requires your adoration. What, you won't bow before Ore-sama? GUARDS! *you are FORCED to bow before Ore-sama, cause that's how the world works*
l_schizophrenic
Dec. 23rd, 2006 01:18 am (UTC)
He cried his own name when he came, because really, who else could touch him?
I know almost everyone else commented on that sentence, but I loved that line.

Plus I love you for writing this. ^__^ This pairing needs more love! It is so hard to find Kabaji/Atobe fics...
snowym
Dec. 23rd, 2006 02:28 am (UTC)
Shh, it's a secret... that's my favorite line too XD;.

Yay, I'm glad you liked it ^___^. I haven't written anymore of this pairing, but I kind of want to. It's so... yeah, I like them XD.

How did you even find this fic? I think I posted it to a random tenipuri community once upon a time, but that was ages ago XD;.
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