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[FIC] Flash [PG - InuKai]

Title: Flash
Author: M snowym
Pairing: InuKai
Rating: PG
Warnings: peeping, near-nekkid!photography
Word Count: 585
#18 - Photograph for 30_cracks
Note: I was originally going to name this fic 'Hot Flashes,' but then decided that was too porn-o-rific for a PG fic. So I mentioned it here ^^.

The whole room went white for one moment. All that was left in the wake was Kaidoh and Inui, standing across from one another.

Inui looked distinctly guilty, though.

Tennis practice had finished for the day, and Kaidoh hadn’t sensed anyone else in the locker room as he stepped out of the shower, towel slung around his hips. But there stood Inui, partly concealed behind a row of lockers, clutching his camera that apparently had a traitorous flash. Kaidoh clutched the towel tightly, suddenly aware of himself.

He should get mad.

He should yell at this person for violating his privacy, for making him feel ashamed in his own skin like this.

Maybe the flash had accidentally gone off this time, but how many times had Inui been able to successfully take a photograph of him in secret?

He wondered why he wasn’t yelling yet, demanding to know why. Instead, as his mouth fell open, the only word he could find was “Senpai?”

And his senpai just stood there, looking awkward, looking anywhere but where his towel-clad kouhai stood. The rectangular frames that usually hid all emotion were clipped in a belt loop, so that the viewfinder could be easily seen through, but that left Inui wide open. The older boy looked ashamed, like he possibly wanted to die, just like he himself had wanted to do a moment ago when his form was attached to a negative within that camera. Kaidoh wondered if Inui felt just as naked as he did, as one of Inui’s hands fished for his glasses, once again covering his terrified eyes.

Kaidoh wondered what he should do.

Maybe he ought to yank the camera from the other’s white-fisted grip on the camera, and smash it against the ground, but he wasn’t sure. Wasn’t that what the other had coming? But... that could destroy more than just the camera.

Just yesterday, they had gone to a movie after training, had laughed and acted like friends. Was that all been ruined now? Could he never joke around with the other again, and enjoy his company? Could he get over Inui doing something as base as taking a half-clothed picture of his body?

Kaidoh didn’t especially care for revenge, pettiness, or complexities, though.

So after not much thought at all, he strode over to the other, still wearing just a towel. He plucked the camera from the other’s grasp, which was relinquished quickly. Inui had probably calculated that that would be the first thing his volatile friend would damage, which was rightfully deserved. But against his predictions, Kaidoh just held it out at arm’s length. After wrapping his free arm around his senpai’s waist, he hissed out a “Smile,” before hitting the button.

The room went white once more from the flash, and Kaidoh thought it wasn’t so bad having Inui like him enough to want pictures of him.

Inui had trembled against his side when Kaidoh pulled him near, still aggrieved at Kaidoh finding out his dirty little secret. Now he just stared at his kouhai in shock, as the camera was returned to him.

Kaidoh walked back to his locker, saying he’d see Inui later as he retrieved his spare set of clothes. He heard a weak, probably shocked reply, as footsteps sounded, followed by a bang of the door closing.

When Kaidoh knew he was actually alone this time, he immediately blushed from being so bold towards his senpai.

Kaidoh hoped that would be enough fan service for now.

Comments

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phat_bunnie
Mar. 18th, 2006 09:50 pm (UTC)
Kaidoh's reaction was very unexpected, but still shear greatness. The last line killed me. *Runs off to read your other inukai fics*
snowym
Mar. 21st, 2006 11:51 am (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it ^_^. If anything else, I like making my last lines pretty good. The rest of my fic may suck, but you know you wanna read the whole thing to get to the ending line, nfu ^^. *cough* Pay no attention to me, glad you liked it ^^;!
hamburgerjack
Mar. 18th, 2006 10:04 pm (UTC)
Kaidoh's reaction is very weird...doyou mind if I write a story along the same theme just in my own way?

I'll certainly credit youwith giving me the idea.
snowym
Mar. 21st, 2006 11:52 am (UTC)
Go for it ^^;. Themes have such a metaphorical existence, I cannot own the theme, and you cannot own the theme, but we may all adapt it to become our own ideas. *philosiphical*

Sure ^^.
ad_exia
Mar. 18th, 2006 10:24 pm (UTC)
I like it! I especially like your like about how Kaidoh didn’t especially care for revenge, pettiness, or complexities, though. I think that's very, very true.

I think it was really cute, and Kaidoh needs to be bold more often~!
snowym
Mar. 21st, 2006 11:55 am (UTC)
Thanks, I tis happy you enjoyed it ^_^. Of course, there are a few people he'd set aside his good human nature for, but generally, he doesn't enjoy revenge. Although I do believe that he weekly fills Momoshiro's tennis shoes with toothpaste before practice ^^.

I enjoy Kaidoh being bold also, he has the strength, he just needs some more will power ^_^.
ad_exia
Mar. 21st, 2006 12:17 pm (UTC)
Ahahaha, well, yes. Momo is special. XD;

And yes, I agree! Kaidoh is such love~
disutansu
Mar. 18th, 2006 10:43 pm (UTC)
I do love how Kaidoh reacted.. instead of how he wanted to act initially. XD I don't think it'll do the future relationship good if he were to hit Inui or something. >.>;; Inui you're lucky! Getting a pic of a semi-naked Kaidoh already. *hee* Now you can manip more pics with ease on your computer! *gets bricked by Kaidoh* x.o
snowym
Mar. 21st, 2006 11:57 am (UTC)
I think you're the only one that commented that liked how Kaidoh reacted XD;. I just wanted him to pose in a picture with Inui, is that so bad ^^? *cough* Of course it is! I never said I wrote good ficcage, I just write ficcage ^^.

What Kaidoh didn't know was that that pic he took will be Inui's background on his computer for many years to come >3.
disutansu
Mar. 21st, 2006 09:24 pm (UTC)
O.O But it's a good thing! Inui could've been punched and misunderstood and never pursue Kaidoh ever again after that brutal rejection! T-T That would've been bad.

It WAS good ficcage you thing. *bops* Helen-sama says so!

XDDDDDDDD I wouldn't be surprised. I bet he'd manip it with his semi-naked self too!
setsu_suji
Mar. 26th, 2006 10:57 am (UTC)
heehee.. i didn't know kaidoh could actually do that.. yay! for kaidoh!! half nekid kaidoh with inui!! it spells fun.. fufufufu..

simply lovely, your fic.. write more~
cherrysnowflake
Apr. 2nd, 2006 09:36 pm (UTC)
that was such a good ending
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