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[FIC] Mint Love [InuKai - PG]

*tags disutansu* Tag, you're it ^^! Your turn to post, mwhahaha.

Title: Mint Love
Author: M snowym
Pairing: InuKai
Rating: PG
Warnings: Just a kiss. Pretty tame ^^;.
Word Count: 444
#15b ~ Worst pick up line for 30_cracks
Note: Un-beta'd. Title stolen from chibimono, I haven't even told her yet as I post this ^^;. Forgive me! *bows deeply* Your dj-fic title generating is truly wonderful ^^.
Special thanks: disutansu,chibimono, and kishmet are always causing random fic ideas to pop into my head with our scary conversations ^^. I blame chibimono for this one though. *points!*

“Here.”

“No.”

“Take it.”

“No.”

“Just use it.”

“No.”

“It’s unhygienic otherwise.”

“It’s unhygienic anyway.”

Kaidoh had never said no to his senpai so many times before, but he wasn’t about to do what what he was suggesting. It was just... wrong. You’re not supposed to do things like that, everyone knew. Why didn’t Inui?

Inui once again proffered the toothbrush to Kaidoh. About two inches from his nose. Kaidoh’s eyes crossed just a little bit, looking at it. Green handle and bristles. Green toothpaste on the tip. It made him wonder if Inui’s shampoo and soap were green too.

“I said no,” Kaidoh said, lightly swinging his legs from his perch on the bathroom counter.

“You’re wearing my pajamas, I don’t see how this is any more harmful,” Inui retaliated.

“I didn’t know I was going to be spending the night. Its not my fault.” Kaidoh tugged on the white cotton pants which fell past his toes. He blushed, pulling up the collar of the shirt, when he realized it had fallen off his shoulder. Dammit, Inui was too tall for his own good.

“Just think of it as an indirect kiss.”

“As a... what?” Kaidoh blushed fiercely, fingers clutching the edge of the counter. “...baka.” He was sure his face was on fire. Inui always was able to say something that caused his skin to flush.

‘Kaidoh’s blushing... kawaii...’ Inui stepped up to the counter, right in front of Kaidoh. “An indirect kiss,” he repeated, running his hands over Kaidoh’s cotton-clad knees. “Although, I prefer direct kisses by far.”

Inui leaned in, brushing their foreheads together. Kaidoh’s eyes slid shut with a sigh. Leaning forward the last few centimeters, senpai claimed the lips of his kouhai. Kaidoh wrapped his arms around Inui’s neck, pulling him closer. After a few moments, their mouths pulled apart, although they stayed close together, breaths mingling.

“I don’t see the problem,” Inui whispered, lips moving to lick a line across the shell of Kaidoh’s ear, “you’ve had far worse things of mine in that mouth of yours than just a toothbrush.” At the sight of Kaidoh’s eyes widening in mortification, Inui made a speedy getaway, darting around the corner and towards his own bedroom.

“Baka Inui-senpai!” Kaidoh called, banging his fists on the counter. Hopping off the surface, he chased after him. No way Inui could get away with saying something like that. ‘Even if it was true,’ Kaidoh thought embarassedly, a blush staining his cheeks.

As Kaidoh ran past, the toothbrush was knocked off the counter. Once the object of an intense debate, it clattered onto the linoleum, toothpaste down, unnoticed by anyone. Hygienics could wait.

Comments

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disutansu
May. 31st, 2005 02:35 pm (UTC)
Oh, what the heck, M. XD And I just finished saying that it was your turn to post to Kish. XD *hands the baton to Chibi* It's her turn. >.>;;

OMG, you actually wrote to this fic. XDDDDDDDD *is so very amused* Chibi is definitely the inspirer of fic titles. X3 *snuggles her*

The part where I'm imagining Kaidoh in Inui's pajamas makes me *diiiiiiiieeeeeeeee* Guh... Slipping off his shoulder... *dies again* There's just something so very smexy about that. *wonders if Kaidoh's black tank top ever slips off*

Inui is so very evil. Honestly. XD I think he enjoys torturing Kaidoh that way with his naughty-ness. XDDD And I HATE it when my toothbrush falls to the floor... *ewwwww* Tis conspiring against me or something.

*glomps* Hurray for writing yet again M! I shall ignore your semi-evil laugh and tag Chibi to post. ^^;
snowym
May. 31st, 2005 08:33 pm (UTC)
O.o. I'm just quick like that ^^. You forgot about my mad rambling skillz.

Kaidoh's black tank top slips off because Inui makes it slip off. Via his hands tearing it off his body. *nodnod* That's a loose definition of 'slip' though ^^;.

Inui is evil. And lewd ^^. In their relationship, Inui is definitely the pervifier, and Kaidoh is the un/depervifier. Yay ^^! *is like Inui*

I said I would not be lazy in my fanworks this summer, and I am trying ^^. *throws confetti* This is exciting, 3 more fics already. *nodnod* ^_^
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kishmet
May. 31st, 2005 02:49 pm (UTC)
XDDDDDDDDDDDDD YOU POSTED!!! *GLOMPS YOU* I can just tell that this is going to be a good day ^________^

Kaidoh in Inui's pajamas, ZOMG!!!! I know Helen already said it, but...ZOMG!!!! *squeals just thinking about it* I love it, I love it!!! <3's to you!!!!!!!!!
snowym
May. 31st, 2005 08:18 pm (UTC)
I did post! *is amazed* I like... hardly ever post. This is gonna become a scary habit o.O;. *is worried*

I about choked on my Sprite when I thought of InuiPajamas!Kaidoh, it made me so happy ^^. He'd be so smexy. *wallows in the <3*
mirai4
May. 31st, 2005 03:05 pm (UTC)
LOL. This is just so adorable!! :D

*suddenly feels like drawing Kaidoh in a too-large pair of pjs* >:P
snowym
May. 31st, 2005 07:46 pm (UTC)
Aww, I'm glad you liked it ^^. This was my first try at writing cuteness, so I'm glad you thought it was so.

If you do, you must tell me ^______^.
heart_of_butter
May. 31st, 2005 03:16 pm (UTC)
“you’ve had far worse things of mine in that mouth of yours than just a toothbrush.”

Yeah, I'd brush those teeth if I were you, Kaidoh. XD
snowym
May. 31st, 2005 07:43 pm (UTC)
He'll probably have to later o.O. Eww, and now the toothbrush has been on the ground. They're gonna have to go buy toothbrushes ^^;.

Yay, thanks for reading ^^.
rikunghts
May. 31st, 2005 03:37 pm (UTC)
WAHHH!! CUTE!!! Omg, Kaidoh in Inui's pajama's is so cute ; ; And *giggles* Oh its wonderful. <3
snowym
May. 31st, 2005 07:48 pm (UTC)
Yay, I'm honored that you liked it ^___^. *bows*
ad_exia
May. 31st, 2005 03:45 pm (UTC)
Dude, that was oh-so-cute (to echo what everyone else has said...)! Awesome. ^_^
snowym
May. 31st, 2005 07:49 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that its a good echo though ^^. Everyone saying "you suck" would've been a lot less heartening. Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it ^^.
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yukihime9
May. 31st, 2005 08:24 pm (UTC)
That was too cute. I loved the InuKai interaction in this one.

You’ve had far worse things of mine in that mouth of yours than just a toothbrush

Inui's too evil for his own good. >D
snowym
May. 31st, 2005 08:35 pm (UTC)
Aww, sankyu ^^. *bows*

Inui is pure evil, but Kaidoh <3's him anyway. ^^
wickedmuffin
May. 31st, 2005 11:13 pm (UTC)
kawaii!!! zomg! *dies of teh cute* :D:D:D they're adorable. you write them awsomely. MORE!!! *cough* <3
snowym
Jun. 1st, 2005 09:56 am (UTC)
Yay, I'm glad you liked it ^^. *revives you* Dying is bad, 'kay? More? *falls over* Yes, I'm writing more ^^. I'm almost always working on something for this fandom o.O;.
cat_shinobi
Jun. 1st, 2005 02:55 pm (UTC)
Aw, that's so cute, M! Nice fic! ^_^
snowym
Jun. 1st, 2005 03:33 pm (UTC)
CAT ^____^!!! Yay, I'm glad you liked my fic. I actually wrote one that wouldn't kill you to read ^^. *throws confetti in celebration* I've got another PG fic posted too, although its fairly more crack'y than this one.
fire_ban
Jun. 2nd, 2005 07:08 am (UTC)
Omg, he ran! XD;; Maybe I'm demented, but that was the most adorable part of the ficcy to me~<33 Haa, the cuteness~! >XD You rock.
snowym
Jun. 2nd, 2005 05:41 pm (UTC)
Yay, I'm glad you liked it ^^. I thought at chase scene would finish off the crack'y-ness of it all, I'm glad you thought it was cute ^_^. *bows* I hope to bring more scary fic reading to you in the future.
legit
Jun. 2nd, 2005 05:05 pm (UTC)
Yay! It's so unbashedly cute! I lauff how you snuck in the smut...*knudges with elbow*...c'mon, why was Kaidoh waring Inui's clothes at his house? *get's whacked with a random object* ok...so maybe they just um*can't compute any non -gay scenarios, shino_stalker gets a huge nosebleed*

PS: I <3 your icon! *^^*
snowym
Jun. 2nd, 2005 05:44 pm (UTC)
YESH! You noticed ^^. I always try to sneak in scary stuff, that's just my way. If you have read my first two fics, you'd understand just a tad of my scary perversion ^^. Why do you think Kaidoh was chasing Inui at the end? Yes, booty time has come. At the end, there is hot-smexin' implied ^^. Ooh, careful about those nosebleeds! *grabs a mop*

Sankyu, I <3 my icon too ^^. *watches the NaoSo glomp over and over and over and over again FOREVARH*
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